Thursday, October 9, 2014

Shark Tank Reflection


I didn’t do as well as I was but I do think I got my point across. I had practiced the speech a lot but I forgot some of it when I got up there so instead I had to improvise. That is probably why I didn’t do as well as I was hoping. I think I did well on delivering the speech, but I do think I have to work on memorization. I think if I wouldn’t have forgotten some of my speech it would have been a lot better. The speech itself I think wasn’t bad and my deliver could have used a bit of work but I think it worked out well in the end.

The feedback that you gave me on the speech was good, it is things I will have to work on and try and do next time. I think for the question: “Why do you care about this project?”  I will work on that part, which was one of things that I forgot to say in my speech.  Next time I will add that part and make sure to say it. The other thing that you mentioned was to not stay stationary the whole time. That is something big I have to work on, I am use to presenting with a poster or power point or in a debate setting where you have to stand stationary so this will be my challenge to work on for next time. But I will try and implicate the advice you gave me for the next speech I do.

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